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I-AM-TEH-FASTEST-11
12-11-2005, 01:21 AM
OK, so I wrote a song, thought I would record it...
I recorded the vocals, guitars and bass, I did the drums in a syth cause even though I could play the stuff I wrote, they are a bitch to record.... anyway nobody take it super serious... it's just me messing around.

My song is about like break ups, and no one ever says what they really mean. Like the whole "yeh, we can be friends" thing, bah rubbish.
So this is like, what most people, or at least me, are saying when they break up.

http://www.blitzkriegfilms.com/translation.mp3


ohhh and apparently it's hard to hear the words? so here are the lyrics I wrote....

Translation

I never loved you,
I just wanted to f***,
I hate you,
Im gonna kill you
and Ill bury you in my backyard,
and if i run out of room ill
cut your fat ass....
into pieces

pieces
into pieces
into pieces


Ill buy quicklime
so you decompose
my lawn will be so much better
Ill bury you with the letter
that I never, even read
sitting here, wishing you were dead

dead
wish you were dead
wish you were dead
wish you were dead

I never though
I would run out of room
for all the bodies
I really, really really
thinks its obvious
it's just like
how could a f***
turn into this shit?
I really dont know what the f*** im thinking
I hate you
I hate you
I hate you
I should have left you to die

die
want you to die
want you to die
die
want you to die
want you to die
want you to die

zorf
12-11-2005, 02:09 AM
lol.......

-DAvo
12-11-2005, 02:17 AM
oookkayyy.... so how many poor unfortunate girls have you "broken up" with? :p

lol good job with the editing

Robza
12-11-2005, 06:54 AM
Sounds pretty weird but funny lol but u could be louder:D

johnny
12-11-2005, 08:59 AM
Yeah nice one Dave, I think a nice long woman's scream at the end would top it right off!

So, is that emo music? :p :p :p

Dim
12-11-2005, 09:03 AM
:confused: , oh ok, if that floats your boat, go for it

nice work

shirtz
12-11-2005, 09:22 AM
my fringe just got blacker and longer reading the lyrics

Tailus
12-11-2005, 11:19 AM
Your beats need some serious attention. Keep working on it.

I-AM-TEH-FASTEST-11
12-11-2005, 11:49 AM
hah well I was kinda trying to pay out emo music, so if it sounds emo then I guess I half achieved that.

and yeh I wish I could do a bad ass 80's girl scream at the end, but I just havent got jeans tight enough for that.....

thanks for the input guys

and1
12-11-2005, 12:42 PM
Haha fuck dave, you got too much freetime on your hands. Ever considered a career as a front man for an emo band? You should've included something in it about selling the sex tapes after they were gone.

sammy boy
14-11-2005, 03:42 PM
it might just be my computer but if it isnt, it could be louder words included and as Dim said, whatever floats your boat

Caine
14-11-2005, 03:53 PM
Not a Bad song but..EMMOOOO

wdshiver
15-11-2005, 04:37 PM
Hey, i love the bass. What does EMO mean??? :confused: